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The graphs below show the Expenditure on Health & Education, UAE as percentages of GDP and Infant mortality and life expectancy.

The graphs below show the Expenditure on Health & Education, UAE as percentages of GDP and Infant mortality and life expectancy.
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 'Expenditure on
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 &
Education
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, UAE as % of GDP' and has three pairs of bars representing the
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 1985, 1990, and 1993. In 1985,
health
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 expenditure was around 4.0%, and
education
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 was approximately 12.0%. In 1990,
health
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 was just under 6.0%, and
education
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 was around 8.0%. In 1993,
health
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 was about 6.5%, and
education
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 was approximately 13.5%. The bottom graph is a line chart
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Infant
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Mortality
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 and
Life
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Expectancy
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, 1970 - 1992' with two lines, one for
life
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expectancy
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 (
years
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) and the other for
infant
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mortality
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 (per 1000 births). In 1970,
life
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expectancy
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 was about 65
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, and
infant
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mortality
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 was roughly 80 per 1000 births. By 1992,
life
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expectancy
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 had increased to just under 75
years
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,
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infant
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mortality
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 had decreased significantly to about 20 per 1000 births.

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