The graphs below show the Expenditure on Health & Education, UAE as percentages of GDP and Infant mortality and life expectancy.

The graphs below show the Expenditure on Health & Education, UAE as percentages of GDP and Infant mortality and life expectancy.
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'Expenditure on
Health
&
Education
, UAE as % of GDP' and has three pairs of bars representing the
years
1985, 1990, and 1993. In 1985,
health
expenditure was around 4.0%, and
education
was approximately 12.0%. In 1990,
health
was just under 6.0%, and
education
was around 8.0%. In 1993,
health
was about 6.5%, and
education
was approximately 13.5%. The bottom graph is a line chart
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Infant
Mortality
and
Life
Expectancy
, 1970 - 1992' with two lines, one for
life
expectancy
(
years
) and the other for
infant
mortality
(per 1000 births). In 1970,
life
expectancy
was about 65
years
, and
infant
mortality
was roughly 80 per 1000 births. By 1992,
life
expectancy
had increased to just under 75
years
,
whereas
infant
mortality
had decreased significantly to about 20 per 1000 births.
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