The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant.
The charts illustrate the career prospects of
graduate
and postgraduate British students
in the year 2008, excluding full-time jobs. Overall
, it is clear that
while
their tendency was mostly towards studying further
, they were less likely to participate in voluntary work, regardless of their educational levels. In addition
, the number of graduate
students
being engaged in an occupation after college was enormously higher.
Focusing on graduate
students
, a great urge to pursue their studies further
is noticeable with an estimated number of 30,000 students
. Moreover
, Part-time occupations take the second place with just above 17,000 students
, followed by being unemployed in the third place with nearly 16,000 pupils. Meanwhile, graduate
pupils showcased a low passion for voluntary work as only 3,500 of them went after them.
In terms of postgraduate ones, continuing their education was still the leader, consisting of 2,725 students
. Similarly
, 2,535 students
went after part-time jobs, making it the second famous option. However
, postgraduate students
had a considerably lower tendency towards being unemployed and doing voluntary jobs with nearly 1,600 and 350 students
, respectively.
Comparing the charts, it is obvious that graduate
students
were more eager to take up a job after college in the same year with a difference of approximately 1000-20000 students
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