The charts show the age at which people left full-time education as well as the average salary they were making two years after entering the workforce. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the
years
in which Use synonyms
people
left full-time education and the Use synonyms
salary
they earned two Use synonyms
years
after starting work. In general, the Use synonyms
age
at which most stopped working full time was between 19 and 21 Use synonyms
years
old, and the average Use synonyms
salary
they received was approximately 24 Use synonyms
thousand
at the Use synonyms
age
of 22 to 24 Use synonyms
years
.
Of the Use synonyms
people
who abandoned full-time education, the highest proportion was between 19 to 21 Use synonyms
years
old, followed by the group of Use synonyms
people
from 22 to 24 Use synonyms
years
old and in a very similar proportion was the group of Use synonyms
people
from 16 to 18 Use synonyms
years
old Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
However
, only a small minority was 3%, which corresponds to Linking Words
ages
before 16 Use synonyms
years
.
Another important factor that must be taken into account is the Use synonyms
salary
between Use synonyms
ages
, the Use synonyms
salary
with the highest Use synonyms
salary
was that of those between the Use synonyms
ages
of 22 and 24 with an average of $24 Use synonyms
thousand
, and those under 16 Use synonyms
years
old earned 17 Use synonyms
thousand
dollars.
In comparison, Use synonyms
although
the Linking Words
age
that abandoned full-time studies the fastest was 19 to 21 Use synonyms
years
old, it was not the one that earned the most, Use synonyms
although
its average is $22 Linking Words
thousand
; and the one who earned the most $24 Use synonyms
thousand
was the second to abandon her full-time studies, which was between the Use synonyms
ages
of 22 and 24. and the Use synonyms
age
that represents less than before 16 Use synonyms
years
, it was observed that he had less income in his Use synonyms
salary
of less than $16 Use synonyms
thousand
.Use synonyms
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