The charts show the age at which people left full-time education as well as the average salary they were making two years after entering the workforce. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs illustrate the
years
in which people
left full-time education and the salary
they earned two years
after starting work. In general, the age
at which most stopped working full time was between 19 and 21 years
old, and the average salary
they received was approximately 24 thousand
at the age
of 22 to 24 years
.
Of the people
who abandoned full-time education, the highest proportion was between 19 to 21 years
old, followed by the group of people
from 22 to 24 years
old and in a very similar proportion was the group of people
from 16 to 18 years
old years
. However
, only a small minority was 3%, which corresponds to ages
before 16 years
.
Another important factor that must be taken into account is the salary
between ages
, the salary
with the highest salary
was that of those between the ages
of 22 and 24 with an average of $24 thousand
, and those under 16 years
old earned 17 thousand
dollars.
In comparison, although
the age
that abandoned full-time studies the fastest was 19 to 21 years
old, it was not the one that earned the most, although
its average is $22 thousand
; and the one who earned the most $24 thousand
was the second to abandon her full-time studies, which was between the ages
of 22 and 24. and the age
that represents less than before 16 years
, it was observed that he had less income in his salary
of less than $16 thousand
.Submitted by viataz33 on
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