This graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

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The graph illustrates how the energy was consumed in the USA from 1980 to 2030.

Overall

it is clear that

Petrol

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the Petrol

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and Oil

units

were the absolute leaders in

this

matter.

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In Additionall

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Additionall

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Additionally

, Hydropower fuel was consumed the

lowest

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most

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for energy generation. Focusing on before implementing projections, Petrol and Oil were the dominant fuels in the matter of energy consumption with approximately 35 to 40 quadrillion

units

. In terms of Coal and Natural gas resources,

while

taking

the

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apply

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second place, both had a gradual increment from roughly 15 to well above 25

units

. Meanwhile, Nuclear, Solar or wind, and Hydropower fuels were

least

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the least

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consumed as they all

strarted

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started

just above 5

units

and

reaching

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reached

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a quadrillion of nearly 8

units

for the former, and 5 for the two laters. Moving on to after the projection

implemention

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implementation

, which is

2015

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from 2015

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to 2030, Petrol and Oil witnessed a significant surge to 50

units

Additionally

while

both coal resources continued increasing,

finally

surpassed Natural

gas's

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gas

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, and reached

its

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their

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peak at 30

units

in the

last

year. The

last

three fuels,

however

, plateaued between 5 to 10

units

per year.

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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12Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

185 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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energy consumption
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projected
dominant source
slight fluctuations
steady increase
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