The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari sons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of budget that people usually spend on
restaurant
meals
and home cooking, while
the line graph compared
the number of Wrong verb form
compares
meals
in two different typed
of Replace the word
types
foods
from 1970 to 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
food
Overall
, it can be seen obviously that there were
Change the verb form
was
partial
proportion in both Correct article usage
a partial
restaurant
and home food
, in 2000. Additionally
, Fast food
meals
and Restaurant
meals
experienced an upward trend throughout the period.
According to
the pie charts, there were
only 10% of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
food
budget for Correct article usage
the food
restaurant's
Change noun form
restaurant
meals
, before the number increasing
continually to 15%, 35% , Wrong verb form
increased
untill
50% Correct your spelling
until
at the end
of the period. However
, the money spending
on home cooking Replace the word
spent
food
decreased significantly from 90% in 1970 to 65% in 1990, then
dropped to 50% in
ten years later, which reached the same percentage Change preposition
apply
with
the Change preposition
as
another
one.
Turning to the line graph, fast Fix the agreement mistake
other
food
started at 20 meals
per year in the beginning then
dradually
climbed up to around 25 Correct your spelling
gradually
meals
in the following decade. Afterward
, Change the spelling
Afterwards
this
number went up sharply to 85 meals
approximately in
20 years later, resulting in the highest Change preposition
apply
meals
Correct quantifier usage
number of meals
in
Change preposition
apply
annual
of all. Change the word
annually
Furthermore
, sitdown
Correct your spelling
sit-down
restaurant
meals
accounted for 20 meals
in the first year, before rising steeply to around 45 meals
per years
Fix the agreement mistake
year
at the end
of the period.Submitted by saiparnwc on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words restaurant, meals, food with synonyms.
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