The charts below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the average number of meals eaten in fast-food restaurants and sit-down restaurants per family. Summarize1 the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari sons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate the amount of budget that people usually spend on
restaurant
Use synonyms
meals
and home cooking, Use synonyms
while
the line graph Linking Words
compared
the number of Wrong verb form
compares
meals
in two different Use synonyms
typed
of Replace the word
types
foods
from 1970 to 2000.
Fix the agreement mistake
food
Overall
, it can be seen obviously that there Linking Words
were
Change the verb form
was
partial
proportion in both Correct article usage
a partial
restaurant
and home Use synonyms
food
, in 2000. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Fast Linking Words
food
Use synonyms
meals
and Use synonyms
Restaurant
Use synonyms
meals
experienced an upward trend throughout the period.
Use synonyms
According to
the pie charts, there Linking Words
were
only 10% of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Use synonyms
food
budget for Correct article usage
the food
Use synonyms
restaurant's
Change noun form
restaurant
meals
, before the number Use synonyms
increasing
continually to 15%, 35% , Wrong verb form
increased
untill
50% Correct your spelling
until
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
However
, the money Linking Words
spending
on home cooking Replace the word
spent
food
decreased significantly from 90% in 1970 to 65% in 1990, Use synonyms
then
dropped to 50% Linking Words
in
ten years later, which reached the same percentage Change preposition
apply
with
the Change preposition
as
another
one.
Turning to the line graph, fast Fix the agreement mistake
other
food
started at 20 Use synonyms
meals
per year in the beginning Use synonyms
then
Linking Words
dradually
climbed up to around 25 Correct your spelling
gradually
meals
in the following decade. Use synonyms
Afterward
, Change the spelling
Afterwards
this
number went up sharply to 85 Linking Words
meals
approximately Use synonyms
in
20 years later, resulting in the highest Change preposition
apply
Use synonyms
meals
Correct quantifier usage
number of meals
in
Change preposition
apply
annual
of all. Change the word
annually
Furthermore
, Linking Words
sitdown
Correct your spelling
sit-down
restaurant
Use synonyms
meals
accounted for 20 Use synonyms
meals
in the first year, before rising steeply to around 45 Use synonyms
meals
per Use synonyms
years
Fix the agreement mistake
year
at the end
of the period.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words restaurant, meals, food with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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