The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices ot three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices ot three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
I think the graph shows the number of changes in copper and nickel
also
zinc, and I see that they happened in 2014.
Overall
, I see that all metals have not good trend because of their decline in 2014.
Additionally
, I already think that they were very specific that even though Nikel had the highest prices in the beginning, I see that it was replaced by zinc which is a very cool trend. With regards to Nikel,
it is clear that
I am interested in talking about it more than other materials which were very terrible. Simply put, I see Nickel had a good beginning in that it stood at 6% in January which is easy to find,
then
it got many accidents in trading systems that I see it very bad for them in order to drop in the next months from January to June.
However
, it was very lucky that it went up to -1% and remained unchanged which feels boring and rose to 1% in December. Turning to 2 other materials that I hate a lot. In terms of copper, I feel sorry to say that it is very bad that it just fluctuated around 1% during the timeframe. As for zinc, it is very difficult for me to describe because it moved a lot from 1% to 3% in 2 months,
then
it was cool to move from 3% to 2% by long-distant journey in the chart and ended at 2%.
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