The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Contained in two illustrations is information pertaining to the transformation of a town centre from 1990 to

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the present day. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that the site has been modernized with the installation of brand-new public amenities.

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, the central area of the town remained intact. Looking at the plans in

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detail, starting with the north-west,

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Newton

street

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witnessed no changes

whereas

the row of buildings from

newsagent's

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cafe

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were converted into a shopping mall. In front of that, there was Smith

Street

which used to be a road but it was redeveloped into a pedestrian walking zone. Regarding the

north-east

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, the childcare

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and the bank opposite it

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left untouched.

However

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zebra crossing was erected on Oldfield

Street

and the old bank was knocked down to build a cafe. Turning to the southern part of the graphic, every single

houses

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along Green

Street

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cleared for the construction of apartment blocks.

Furthermore

, there is

also

a new crossing at the Green

Street

and Oldfield

Street

intersection.

Lastly

, the park, library and the town hall experienced no alternatives.

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4 paragraphs

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