The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Contained in two illustrations is information pertaining to the transformation of a town centre from 1990 to
until
the present day.
From an observational perspective, it can be seen that the site has been modernized with the installation of brand-new public amenities. Change preposition
apply
Additionally
, the central area of the town remained intact.
Looking at the plans in further
detail, starting with the north-west, the
Newton Correct article usage
apply
street
witnessed no changes Capitalize word
Street
whereas
the row of buildings from newsagent's
to Change the noun form
newsagents
newsagent
cafe
were converted into a shopping mall. In front of that, there was Smith Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
Street
which used to be a road but it was redeveloped into a pedestrian walking zone. Regarding the north-east
, the childcare Correct your spelling
northeast
center
and the bank opposite it Change the spelling
centre
was
left untouched. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
However
, new
zebra crossing was erected on Oldfield Correct article usage
a new
Street
and the old bank was knocked down to build a cafe.
Turning to the southern part of the graphic, every single houses
along Green Change to a singular noun
house
Street
were
cleared for the construction of apartment blocks. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Furthermore
, there is also
a new crossing at the Green Street
and Oldfield Street
intersection. Lastly
, the park, library and the town hall experienced no alternatives.Submitted by Nghỉ hè vui vẻ cả nhà on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words street with synonyms.
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