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The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show a town centre in 1990 and the same town centre today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Contained in two illustrations is information pertaining to the transformation of a town centre from 1990 to
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the present day. From an observational perspective, it can be seen that the site has been modernized with the installation of brand-new public amenities.
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, the central area of the town remained intact. Looking at the plans in
further
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 detail, starting with the north-west,
the
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Newton
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street
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 witnessed no changes
whereas
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 the row of buildings from
newsagent's
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 to
cafe
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 were converted into a shopping mall. In front of that, there was Smith
Street
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 which used to be a road but it was redeveloped into a pedestrian walking zone. Regarding the
north-east
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, the childcare
center
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 and the bank opposite it
was
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 left untouched.
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,
new
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 zebra crossing was erected on Oldfield
Street
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 and the old bank was knocked down to build a cafe. Turning to the southern part of the graphic, every single
houses
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 along Green
Street
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were
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 cleared for the construction of apartment blocks.
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, there is
also
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 a new crossing at the Green
Street
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 and Oldfield
Street
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 intersection.
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, the park, library and the town hall experienced no alternatives.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words street with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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