The chart and graph below give information about three categories in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.

The chart and graph below give information about three categories in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.
The pie chart illustrates the
percentage
of the
workers
born in three different nationalities in the year 2003. On the other side, the line graph demonstrates the proportion of unemployed in
Australia
that were born from 1993 to 2003.
Overall
, it was witnessed that the majority of
workers
were born in
Australia
. In the line graph, it can
also
be seen that unemployment rates for all three regions declined over the decade.
Additionally
, the
percentage
of employees from non-English speaking
countries
is always the highest. Looking at the pie chart, the proportion of
workers
in English-speaking
countries
(E.S.C) and non-English speaking
countries
(N.E.S.C) were similar, which were about 10% and 14%.
In addition
, the
percentage
of
workers
that were born in
Australia
had the highest figure and was occupied with 76%. Turning to the data illustrated in the line graph, the
percentage
of unemployed born in N.E.S.C started at more than 7%, after which it witnessed a considerable decline to 3% in 1998, after that, it increased but in 2003, there was a final drop to approximately 3%. The proportion of employees who were born in
Australia
and non-English speaking
countries
have observed a similar trend, with respective levels declining to 2% and 1%
at the end
of the period.
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