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The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.

The line graph compares the number of goods transported to the UK by four various modes of transportation in the years 1974 to 2002. Data are expressed in million of tonnes.
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The given graph illustrates the amount of products transferred to the UK by four diverse types of
transportation
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 between 1974 and 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
goods
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 transported in the UK by all modes of
transportation
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 experienced an upward trend.
Additionally
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, rail and pipeline had an insignificant rise compared to other types. In terms of roads, residents imported 70
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 in 1974,
then
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 remained steady for the next 4
years
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 before slightly increasing to nearly 80
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 between 1982 and 1990.
Subsequently
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, for the following 4
years
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, it stabilized and reached a peak of 95
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 by 2002. With regards to water's
transportation
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, it
initially
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 stood at 40
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 which was
then
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 followed by a dramatic rise to roughly 60
million
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tonnes
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 of products in 1982. For the next 8
years
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, it remained unchanged and gradually decreased to 50
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 in 1998 and ended up at above 60
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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. As for the 2 kinds of
transportation
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, rail and pipeline accounted for 40 and 5
million
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tonnes
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 of
goods
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 in 1974, respectively. Regarding rail, it stayed stable for 4
years
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,
then
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 fluctuated until the final
years
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 with the similar transported
goods
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. Turning toward pipeline, it proceeds to substantially increase at 25
million
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 tones of
goods
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 and levelling off for the whole timeframe

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Vocabulary: Replace the words transportation, goods, million, tonnes, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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