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The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table illustrates the data about the consumption of
water
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 for various purposes in six areas during 2003.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 there are three countries:
Australia
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,
Canada
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 and the
UK
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 , these areas used the most amount of
water
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 in three particular fields.
Firstly
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, in domestic use, the United Kingdom consumed only 5% which is the lowest result in comparison with others, as
Australia
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 demonstrated 65% which is the highest result,
however
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 in the industry
Australia
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 had only 2%, in the meantime,
Canada
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 used 32% of
water
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.
Secondly
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, in agriculture, the
UK
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 had 90%,
whereas
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,
Canada
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 had 5%. The countries which consumed the most
water
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 for agriculture are the
UK
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, China, India and Japan,
while
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Australia
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 had 33% and
Canada
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 5% the same as the
UK
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 in the industry.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, australia, canada, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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