The table below shows the water usage for different purposes in six different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates the data about the consumption of
water
for various purposes in six areas during 2003.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are three countries:Australia
, Canada
and the UK
, these areas used the most amount of water
in three particular fields.
Firstly
, in domestic use, the United Kingdom consumed only 5% which is the lowest result in comparison with others, as Australia
demonstrated 65% which is the highest result, however
in the industry Australia
had only 2%, in the meantime, Canada
used 32% of water
.
Secondly
, in agriculture, the UK
had 90%, whereas
, Canada
had 5%. The countries which consumed the most water
for agriculture are the UK
, China, India and Japan, while
Australia
had 33% and Canada
5% the same as the UK
in the industry.Submitted by aizered097 on
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