Gender quality is always a controversial discussion point, expecially in job market with some occupations preferrable to males rather than females

Gender quality is always a controversial discussion point,

expecially

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especially

in

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market with some occupations

preferrable

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to males rather than

females

.

This

essay’s writer staunchly believes that

women

should have their own rights in the decision of which

job

they will apply for since it ensures that there will be optimum exploration of talented people for the long-lasting development of that country. It is imperative to acknowledge that

females

are naturally

borned

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born

with the identical strength and intelligence to males. With the

the

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same token, not only in other important aspects

such

as education or emotional expressions

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but

also

in choosing a career for their life, an essential symmetry in dividing the proportion of available opportunities

as well as

appreciation must exist, even in some certain jobs that are frequently claimed to only be suitable for men like police officers or serving in the army.

As a result

, female genders will certainly dedicatedly contribute their precious values to

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society

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growth

along with

their nation being

envolved

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involved

thanks to their talented

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involvement

if they are adequately given equal rights as men in

applying

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their dream

job

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jobs

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.

However

, there are some people who strongly consider that

womens

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are not advisable to freely choose their own

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on the grounds that these interesting jobs seem to not appropriate with

themselves

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. To explain it

further

, they thought that some areas that

women

desire for

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require so many specialised features and

prominet

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prominent

characteristics that they do not actually acquire. With that thought in mind, in case

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institutions deliberately recruit them, it will undoubtedly be a waste of

buget

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budget

paid

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for

those non-productive workforce

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.

This

may be a valid point,

however

,

females

still need to keep unchanged in having

job

opportunities

due to

the fact that most of the standards can be easily reached through training courses for pre-employees. Take America as a prime example where a high rate of

women

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successfully

apply

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for police

job

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or being a soldier in

army

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sector is increasing every year, regardless of other countries’s gender stereotypes as

this

nation merely

bases

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on qualifications, practical skills and characteristics for assessing process.

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this

writer’s opinion, gender equality must be considered in

job

application

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.

Inother

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words, once the institutions perpetuate their stereotypes about the weakness of

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women

and prioritize the disadvantages of employing them, they will hardly ever have their institution fully developed because of the scarcity of valuable

contribution

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from

women

.

Therefore

, it is highly recommended that

besides

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more chances for talented

women

in applying

career

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, these

females

also

need to become more and more confident

as well as

belieivng

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believing

in themselves to come out of

the

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comfort zone and gain many achievements, including

succesfully

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successfully

apply for their dream

job

. In conclusion,

women

should be given a chance for

applying

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jobs, especially

police

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officers or being a member

in

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the army institution as they have enough

capility

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capability

capacity

and specialised

standard

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.

Thus

,

women

have to strongly

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in their ability and showcase it for the

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recruiting

recruting

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recruiting

companies

along with

these organisers must change their mindset into more open-minded