The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories, from 1995-2002. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the data about the number of total
minutes
of phone calls by three different types of calls measured in billions in the United Kingdom between 1995 and 2002.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the highest figures were for local landline calls over the given period,
while
the lowest numbers were for mobile calls.
To begin
with, the number of
minutes
spent on local calls experienced a fluctuation, starting from 70
billion
minutes
, in 1995, and increased gradually to reach its peak in 1999 of 90
billion
minutes
. After that, the numbers declined throughout the years to reach the bottom around 70
billion
minutes
.
On the other hand
, people in the UK, in 1995, spent less than 40
billion
minutes
on national and international calls, after that the trend experienced a slight increase during the next seven years, ending with 60
billion
minutes
in 2002.
However
, the lowest
numbers
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of
minutes
were
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spent on mobile calls, in 1995, around 1
billion
minutes
, which rose significantly throughout the years until 2002,
which
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has
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had
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nearly 45
billion
minutes
of telephone calls.
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