The graphs show the percentage of men and women aged 60 - 64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

The given bar charts compare the proportion of males and females which range from 60 to 64,

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recruited in four different nations during the period

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1970 and 2000.

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, the

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for female employees witnessed a more drastic downturn than male employees.

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has a tendency to

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the proportion of senior employees in 2000. There was

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a wider discrepancy among employed women aged 60-64 in four nations compared to men. In terms of the percentage of women workers, the

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for Japan headed the list with 40% in 1970 and slightly increased to 43% in 2000. Meanwhile, Belgium recorded

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the lowest

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at 7% by 1970 and experienced only 1% in the percentage of women

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in 2000. With regard to the percentage of the USA and Australia, both figures experienced a gradual drop of 2%, which declined by 38% to 36% and 18% to 16% respectively. Concerning the proportion of men

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, there is

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upward trend for the number of working

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during the period of 2000 in four countries. Japan

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the first place with 74% in 1970, it

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outlooked a gradual growth to 86% 30 years later. The sector of male workers in Belgium showed a surge from 19% to 79% which was overviewed 10%. The

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for the USA and Australia has a similar pattern with respective levels increasing to 73% and 76% in 2000.