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The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different ages in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart displays the ratio of daily adult
Internet
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users
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 across various
age
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 groups in the UK between 2003 and 2006
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the younger the participants were, the more they used the
Internet
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.
Furthermore
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, the number of people who enjoyed the
Internet
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 has an upward trend over the studied period.
First,
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the 16-24-year-old
years
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 old participants were the most active
Internet
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users
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 with a general percentage of 80% and over throughout the four-year period, even peaking at 100% in 2005.
However
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, the figure for
this
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age
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group
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 dropped slightly to 90% in the next year. The second and third most avid
Internet
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users
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 were citizens aged 25-44 and 45-54, with relatively similar rates, increasing steadily from approximately 50% and 60%, in turn, to 80% by the end of 2006. The figure was slightly higher in the 45-54-year-old
years
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 old
group
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 in the first two
years
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, whose difference with the 25-44
age
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group
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 was 10% in both
years
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. The statistics for the remaining groups were considerably less, with only about half of the people from 55-64
years
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 old that were interested in using the
Internet
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 daily in 2006.
However
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, the figure for
this
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age
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group
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 was lower in the previous
years
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, standing at around a third of its population. The least engaged
Internet
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users
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 were in the 65+
age
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group
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 with a moderate increase from 18% to 20% between 2003-2006. Notably, in 2003, people aged 65 and above did not use the
Internet
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words internet, users, age, years, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • age group
  • daily internet use
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • upward/downward trend
  • year-wise
  • distribution
  • fluctuation
  • highest/lowest
  • technological advancements
  • social changes
  • targeted marketing
  • internet usage patterns
  • technological familiarity
  • lifestyle
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