The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four counthies in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
the bar charts
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the proportion of
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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aged 60-64 in employment in four different nations
in1970
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in 1970
and 2000. The data is shown
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percentage
.
Overall
, it can be seen that
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women the percentages
at
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in
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Belgium
and
Japan
in 2000
higher
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were higher
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than in 1970, both the
USA
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and
anh
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and
Australia had the opposite trend with
Belgium
and
Japan
, in 2000
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it
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the highest, and the
percentage
of
two
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the two
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other were similar
To begin
, the
percentage
of women in 200 was higher than
1970
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in
Belgiumand
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Belgium and
Japan
at 8% and 7% and 43% and 40%
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represented
.
Besides
that, the
USA
and Australia had an exception that the
percantage
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percentage
of women in 1970 was higher than in 2000, opposite with two
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others
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. In the
USA
the
percentage
representing 38% and 36% , 18% and16% ib 1970 and 2000 represented in
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Australia
Austraylia
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Australia
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into
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the
percentage
of
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men
were
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who were
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employed, in
Belgium
the
percentage
had a big
diffirence
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difference
in two years, the
percentage
in
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of
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200 higher than in 1970
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six times, and
Belgium
with
Japan
had the proportion highest in 2000 at 79% and 86% represented. the
USA
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and
Australia had a similar amount
at
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both 2000 and 1970, 73% and 76% in 2000 and 55% and 47% in 1970 represented.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, belgium, japan, usa with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "represented" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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