The bar chart illustrates various means of transport in terms of total mileage covered in the UK from 1990 to 2000.

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, it can be seen that there was an upward trend in using buses and trails in both two years.

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, bus and rail saw an increase in the number of usage

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bike and motor had an opposite trend. In 1990, around 40

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kilometres were travelled by bus

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, followed by about 35

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for railway commuters. After ten years, the number of

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transport rose by 5

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kilometres with 45

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kilometres for bus

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and around 38 for railway

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. Turning to less commonly-used modes of transport, in 1990, there was the highest distance travelled by motor at 6

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, compared to nearly 3

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by bike and just under 1

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by air. Over the following decade, motorbikes and bikes witnessed a decline in levels of usage, with respective figures dropping by around 1

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and 2

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the figure for air travel increased significantly by approximately 3

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