The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph illustrates the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
books
borrowed in 4 distinct months of 2014 in the 4 libraries in a village, while
the next pie chart contains data pertaining to 5 specific types of borrowed book
in the aforementioned period.
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books
Overall
, it can be seen that,
the number of borrowed Remove the comma
apply
books
in 3 libraries namely West Easton, Sutton Wood and Church Mount increased , while
those of Ryelip saw a decrease. In addition
to this
, the type of borrowed book which
was keen on was fiction.
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Lookin
at the line graph in Correct your spelling
Looking
further
detail, the number of books
borrowed in West Easton and Church Mount all stood at 50 books
and tripled to 150 books
throughout the timeframe. Concurrently, Sutton Wood witnessed the rise in the quantity of borrowed books
which was from 250 books
in June to roughly 275 books
in July before dropping dramatically to books
after one month.This
was followed by a recovery from 100 books
to exactly 300 books
throughout the timeframe. By constrast
, the quantity of borrowed Correct your spelling
contrast
books
in Ryeslip was 300 books
in June which hold
the first position compared to the other figures and there was a sharp decrease to roughly 175 Correct subject-verb agreement
holds
books
throughout the period.
Turning to the pie chart, it can be observed that fiction books
was
selected by the most Change the verb form
were
peopld
with 43% compared to biography Correct your spelling
people
books
with 19%. Furthermore
, history and science were 2 types of books
which had the same percentage of 14%. Lastly
, self-help was the only genre which
the villagers borrowed Change preposition
from which
least
with Correct article usage
the least
the
proportion of 19%.Correct article usage
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