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The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graphs give information about the goods bought to New Zealand from
Australia
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 and
Japan
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 between 1994 and 2004, measured in
million
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dollars
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.
Overall
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,
imports
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 from both countries fluctuate over the period.
Additionally
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,
imports
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 from
Australia
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 finished much higher than at the start,
while
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imports
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 from
Japan
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 ended up slightly lower than the start.
Imports
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 from
Australia
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 started and finished much higher than
imports
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 from
Japan
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.
To begin
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 with,
imports
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 from
Australia
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 started at 4000
million
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dollars
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 in 1994 and fluctuated till it has a dip to 3000 in 1999 and continued to rise to approximately 7500
then
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 decreased after that in 2002 before reaching their peak at 8000
million
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dollars
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 in 2004. Turning to the remaining statistic,
Japan
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's
imports
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 start at 3000
million
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dollars
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, lower than
Australia
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's 1000
million
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dollars
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, the figures rose steadily to about 6200 in 1997 and fluctuated before they fell sharply from 6000 in the year 2000 to 3000 in 2001 and continued to decline gradually to 2000
million
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dollars
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 in 2004

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, million, dollars, imports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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