The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The two line graphs below show New Zealand import figures from Australia and Japan in the years 1994 - 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The graphs give information about the goods bought to New Zealand from
Australia
and
Japan
between 1994 and 2004, measured in
million
dollars
.
Overall
,
imports
from both countries fluctuate over the period.
Additionally
,
imports
from
Australia
finished much higher than at the start,
while
imports
from
Japan
ended up slightly lower than the start.
Imports
from
Australia
started and finished much higher than
imports
from
Japan
.
To begin
with,
imports
from
Australia
started at 4000
million
dollars
in 1994 and fluctuated till it has a dip to 3000 in 1999 and continued to rise to approximately 7500
then
decreased after that in 2002 before reaching their peak at 8000
million
dollars
in 2004. Turning to the remaining statistic,
Japan
's
imports
start at 3000
million
dollars
, lower than
Australia
's 1000
million
dollars
, the figures rose steadily to about 6200 in 1997 and fluctuated before they fell sharply from 6000 in the year 2000 to 3000 in 2001 and continued to decline gradually to 2000
million
dollars
in 2004
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words australia, japan, million, dollars, imports with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuate" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • peaks
  • troughs
  • significant changes
  • consistency
  • variations
  • overall growth
  • decline
  • diverge
  • converge
  • spiked
  • economic policies
  • trade agreements
  • global economic events
  • predictive insights
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