The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the
number
of multilingual British
students
at a specific university in England in the years 2000 and 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
Spanish was the most famous language among
students
in both years.
Also
, the
number
of
students
tending to learn another language
besides
English increased considerably. In terms of bilingual
students
, the majority of them went for Spanish with a proportion of 30% in 2000 and 35% in 2015. French taking second place, consisted of 15% and 10% of the
students
in 2000 and 2010, respectively. Importantly,
although
individuals had the least enthusiasm for German in 2000 with only a tenth of
students
learning it, the figure was the same for French and Germany in 2010 with both having a percentage of 10. Moving on to
students
who did not cultivate any additional language, it is noticeable that the
number
of them dwindled substantially from 20% in 2000 and 10% in 2010.
Moreover
,
while
the
number
of those who were interested in other languages rose by 5%, it did not surpass the total
number
of
students
learning Spanish, French, and German.
Lastly
, the population of
students
who went after two additional languages surged by 5% within the years.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, students with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • multilingual
  • linguistic competence
  • significant
  • trend
  • increase/decrease
  • stable
  • popularity
  • relatively
  • decade
  • compare/contrast
  • survey
  • data
  • fluent
  • proficient
  • bilingual
  • predominant
  • minority
  • emerge
  • dwindle
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