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The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the proportion of
men
 and
women
teachers
 in
nursery
/
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pre-school
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pre-
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pre-school
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school
, primary
school
, secondary
school
, college, private training
institute
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institutes
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 and
university
educational
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education
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 in the UK in the year 2010 It is clear from the graph that the
women
teachers
 in
nursery
/
pre-
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pre-school
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school
, primary
school
 and secondary
school
educational
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apply
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were higher than
men
,
however
, the opposite trend was true in the rest of
private
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the private
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 training
institute
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institutes
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 and
university
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universities
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.
While
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In
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 college
educational
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education
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, the
women
 and
men
teachers
was
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were
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 equal In
education
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the education
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sector
nursery
/
pre-
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preschool
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school
, female
teachers
account
 for 95%
while
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of while
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 male
teachers
account
 for only 5%. For
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the education
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education
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the education
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sector
 primary
school
,
women
teachers
account
 for 90%
while
men
 only have 10%. In
education
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the education
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sector
 secondary
school
, the ratio of
women
teachers
 is 58%, lower than
nursery
/
pre-
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pre-school
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school
 and primary
school
 but still higher than
men
 at 42%. In
education
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the education
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sector
 college , the ratio
female
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of female
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 and male
teachers
was
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were
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 equal at 50%
However
, in
sector
 private training
institute
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institutes
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 and
university
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universities
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, the ratio of male
teachers
 is higher than female. In
education
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the education
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sector
 private training
institute
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institutes
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, the percentage of male
teachers
 is 59%
while
 female
teachers
 are 41%. In
education
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the education
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sector
university
, male
teachers
account
 for 70% and female
teachers
account
 for only 30%
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, teachers, nursery, pre-, school, institute, university, education, sector, account with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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