The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison of the proportion of
men
and women
teachers
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pre-school
pre-
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pre-school
school
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, secondary school
, college, private training institute
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university
educational
in the UK in the year 2010
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women
teachers
in nursery
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pre-school
school
, primary school
and secondary school
educational
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men
, however
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the private
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university
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the education
sector
nursery
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preschool
school
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the education
sector
primary school
, women
teachers
account
for 90% while
men
only have 10%. In education
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the education
sector
secondary school
, the ratio of women
teachers
is 58%, lower than nursery
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pre-school
school
and primary school
but still higher than men
at 42%. In education
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the education
sector
college , the ratio female
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of female
teachers
was
equal at 50%
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university
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universities
teachers
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the education
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, teachers, nursery, pre-, school, institute, university, education, sector, account with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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