The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphic gives us information about the
hours
of the day that tourist
from China, the USA, Turkey and Brazil, spent doing different activities during their Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
holydays
in Greece in August 2019. The activities were, going to the beach, reading books and visiting Correct your spelling
holidays
places
.
Overall
, the tourist
spent more time
reading books and less time
visiting places
.
Chinese
tourist
spent 8 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
hours
reading books, following
by Wrong verb form
followed
Americans
with 5 hours
. Turkish
and Brazilians
spend half of the hours
spent by Chinese
, a total of 4 hours
.
Brazilians
spent doble
of Correct your spelling
double
time
at the beach, (6 hours
) than Chinese
, (3 Correct article usage
the Chinese
hours
). Turkish
and Americans
spent 5 and 4 hours
respectively.
Americans
and Turkish
tourist
spent 3 Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
hours
visiting places
, next tourist
were Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
Brazilians
with 2 hours
. Chinese
people were the tourist
who Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
spend
the least Wrong verb form
spent
time
visiting places
(1 hour), half of the hours
than Brazilians
and 3 time
less than Change to a plural noun
times
Turkish
and Americans
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