The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The flow charts illustrate the manufacturing of
silk
cloth and the stages of the silkworm life
cycle
. The first stage of the life
cycle
starts with laying eggs by an adult species, known as a moth. After 10 days silkworm larvae emerge from eggs and start feeding by mulberry leaf for about 4 to 6 weeks. After larvae have been partly covered with
silk
strands, they wait for 3 to 8 days to become fully covered with
silk
. After maturing in the cocoon for about 16 days, the larva completely transformed into an adult moth, and the
cycle
starts
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anew. The first step in producing starts with selecting a suitable cocoon to deal with. After boiling in the water for the required time, it is unwound to get from 300 to 900 meters of thread. In the next step the required thread is twisted, dyed, and
then
weaved on the roll.
Subsequently
, rolled with
silk
is dyed for the
last
time.
Overall
, there are four main stages in the life
cycle
- egg, larva, cocoon, and adult moth - and six in
silk
cloth production - selecting, boiling, unwinding, twisting, weaving, and dyeing.
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