The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The given diagram illustrates the process of
cement
making and special technical equipment, and Use synonyms
also
how Linking Words
cement
is used for producing concrete to build houses.
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, it can be seen that Linking Words
cement
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cement
-making process consists of five stages smashing, mixing, heating, grinding, and packing.
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Initially
, limestones and clay are put into the crusher where they are smashed into the powder. Linking Words
Then
powder goes through the Linking Words
mixer
. The next stage of heating occurs in a special oven which circulates 360 degrees during the whole heating process. Use synonyms
After
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this
stage, a homogenous mass appears which goes to the grinder. Linking Words
Further
, produced Linking Words
cement
is packed into paper or plastic bags. Use synonyms
Finally
, packed Linking Words
cement
is ready for selling or for the production of concrete.
As well known, concrete is the essential raw material in construction. That's why concrete production requires special equipment and keeping the rules of producing technology. As we can see from the diagram to produce concrete, need a concrete Use synonyms
mixer
. Use synonyms
First,
15 per cent of Linking Words
cement
and 25 per cent of sand are put Use synonyms
it
into the Correct pronoun usage
apply
mixer
, and Use synonyms
then
what is added. Linking Words
Further
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mixer
starts to roll. Later, small stones, which are called gravel, are added to the mixture in the Use synonyms
mixer
. After a Use synonyms
while
, produced concrete can be used for building purposes.Linking Words
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