The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages

The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages
The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of three selected demographic trends in Scotland over a period of 80 years from 1940 to 2020. The three categories of demographics consist of
Birth
Rate
, Population Growth
Rate
and
Death
Rate
. Looking at the
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there was a considerable fluctuation in its rates during the given time period. Starting with the
Birth
rate
, whose figure stood at just 2.5% in 1940, witnessed a substantial decline in its
rate
to approximately 0.5% in 2020. In 1945, each sector, apart from the
Death
rate
, had a significant rise in its population
rate
for the 5-year timescale.
In addition
, the population growth
rate
increased to 1.5% in 1955 and gradually dropped to 0% until about 2003. The
Death
rate
experienced a drastic decrease in the years between 1940 and 1955 to reach a plateau of about 0.7% in 1960 with the trend set to continue until by 2010. Between 2010 and 2020, the
birth
rate
decreased and the
death
rate
increased, and in 2020, the
death
rate
eventually exceeded the
birth
rate
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • death rate
  • population growth rate
  • percentage
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • stabilize
  • demographic
  • interrelate
  • historical events
  • social policies
  • economic conditions
  • healthcare advancements
  • variable
  • measured
  • decade
  • significant
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