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The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages

The line graph shows the birth rate, population growth rate and death rate from 1940 until 2020 in Scotland. The three different veriables are measured in percentages
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The line graph illustrates changes in the proportions of three selected demographic trends in Scotland over a period of 80 years from 1940 to 2020. The three categories of demographics consist of
Birth
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Rate
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, Population Growth
Rate
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 and
Death
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Rate
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. Looking at the
overall
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 perspective, it is readily apparent that there was a considerable fluctuation in its rates during the given time period. Starting with the
Birth
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rate
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, whose figure stood at just 2.5% in 1940, witnessed a substantial decline in its
rate
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 to approximately 0.5% in 2020. In 1945, each sector, apart from the
Death
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rate
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, had a significant rise in its population
rate
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 for the 5-year timescale.
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, the population growth
rate
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 increased to 1.5% in 1955 and gradually dropped to 0% until about 2003. The
Death
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rate
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 experienced a drastic decrease in the years between 1940 and 1955 to reach a plateau of about 0.7% in 1960 with the trend set to continue until by 2010. Between 2010 and 2020, the
birth
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rate
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 decreased and the
death
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rate
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 increased, and in 2020, the
death
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rate
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 eventually exceeded the
birth
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rate
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.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 85%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, rate, death with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • death rate
  • population growth rate
  • percentage
  • fluctuation
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • stabilize
  • demographic
  • interrelate
  • historical events
  • social policies
  • economic conditions
  • healthcare advancements
  • variable
  • measured
  • decade
  • significant
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