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Writing Task 1 you have bought some clothing onllne and are not s atisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase -> describe the problem -> explain why you need a replacement urgently Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#onllne #purchase #company #email #replacement #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir, I hope you are doing well, I writing
this
 letter to inform you that my
disppointed
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disappointment
 regarding clothing is
different
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a different
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 size.
Lask
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Last
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 week on
sunday
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, I
have
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bought shoes
by
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online shopping that it is from your store. I purchased it cost 200.000.
During
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ordered
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 the shoes I took
M
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an M
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size
with
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 black colour and suddenly received
cloth
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clothes
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of
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in
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 XL size.
As a result
, the cloth is uncomfortable
for wearing
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to wear
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.
In addition
, there is
problem
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the problem
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of
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 the service which very slow
respon
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response
respond
 by
admin
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the admin
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.
This
 is the first time I got
bad
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 experience that makes me
disppointed
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disappointed
.
Therefore
, I
wish
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 there are some solutions from you.
such
 as,
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 cloth must be changed as owner. Thank you so much, I am looking forward to hearing from you soon Yours Sincerely Purnomo
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task response
Ensure the content directly addresses all parts of the task: giving purchase details, describing the problem, and explaining the urgency for a replacement.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a clear logical flow in your writing by organizing your letter into distinct paragraphs for each main idea.
coherence cohesion
Work on improving the variety and accuracy of your sentence structures to enhance readability and professionalism.
task response
The purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning, which sets a good tone for the content.
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The letter includes specific details such as the type of item (clothing) and issues faced (wrong size and slow service).
coherence cohesion
The opening and closing of the letter are appropriately polite and formal.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • purchase details
  • order number
  • type of clothing
  • amount paid
  • specific issues
  • wrong size
  • poor quality
  • damage
  • urgency
  • replacement
  • upcoming event
  • personal necessity
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