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The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A glance at the column charts delineates statistics about the commensurability of the full-time
work
 that British graduates and
postgraduates
 should not do after finishing college in the year 2008.
Overall
, as it was virtually the main enthusiast of both graduate and postgraduate
students
, they tended to study more.
Conversely
, both
students
 contributed at least in voluntary
work
.
While
 the quota for part-time
work
 and unemployment was approximately the same for graduates, the former predominated the latter for
postgraduates
.
Furthermore
, it can explicitly be perceived that the general proportion of graduates outnumbered that of
postgraduates
. Looking into more details for the most tendencies of graduate
students
,
further
 study was allocated to 29,665 of them.
This
 figure halved roughly for not only temporary vocation but
also
students
 without any jobs, somewhere in the vicinity of 17,735 and 16,235, respectively. In the following destination, the number of
students
 dropped staggeringly taking 3,500. In terms of the other degrees, after the climax of 2,725 for continuing education, the lower destination of UK
postgraduates
 in 2008 sought part-time
work
, at 2,535. For the tertiary kind of thing, unemployment (which is 1,625) was almost five times as much as the
students
 who volunteered for
work
 (which is 345).
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