the charts below show the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other lanhuages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comoarison where relevent.

the charts below show the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other lanhuages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010. 

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comoarison where relevent.
The given charts illustrate information about the ability to speak other
languages
for British
students
at the same university in England in the years 2000 and 2010.
overall
, it is noticeable that during 10 years the majority of them
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were
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able to speak other
languages
than English meanwhile the
percentage
of German speakers remained stable at 10 % .
According to
the first chart which is related to the year 2000,the
percentage
of
students
who speak Spanish is more than other
languages
with 35 %.people who can speak
french
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French
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only and other
languages
are equally contain 15%
additionally
German speakers and two other
languages
speakers have the same
percentage
of 10 %.
on the other hand
, by looking at the second chart which is about the year 2010,it is obvious that the
percentage
of
students
who can speak Spanish and who can speak another two
languages
have increased respectively to 35 % and 20 % at the same time
students
who can not understand other
languages
and who speak french and who Germany own just 10 %.
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