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the charts below show the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other lanhuages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comoarison where relevent.

the charts below show the proportions of british students at one university in england who were able to speak other lanhuages in addition to english,in 2000 and 2010. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comoarison where relevent.
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The given charts illustrate information about the ability to speak other
languages
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 for British
students
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 at the same university in England in the years 2000 and 2010.
overall
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, it is noticeable that during 10 years the majority of them
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 able to speak other
languages
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 than English meanwhile the
percentage
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 of German speakers remained stable at 10 % .
According to
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 the first chart which is related to the year 2000,the
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 of
students
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 who speak Spanish is more than other
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 with 35 %.people who can speak
french
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French
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 only and other
languages
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 are equally contain 15%
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 German speakers and two other
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 speakers have the same
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 of 10 %.
on the other hand
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, by looking at the second chart which is about the year 2010,it is obvious that the
percentage
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 of
students
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 who can speak Spanish and who can speak another two
languages
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 have increased respectively to 35 % and 20 % at the same time
students
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 who can not understand other
languages
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 and who speak french and who Germany own just 10 %.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, students, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • significantly
  • increase
  • decrease
  • multilingual
  • bilingual
  • linguistic skills
  • global context
  • notable
  • trend
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