The table below shows the proportion of the workforce who are women and the proportion of managers who are women in five different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates how many
women
work
in five various countries
whether they are employees or the
managers.
It can be clearly seen thatCorrect article usage
apply
,
Japan has the highest Remove the comma
apply
amount
of women
Labour Force
.However
,the countries
like Australia and the US has
the highest rate of management by Correct subject-verb agreement
have
women
.
The average of women
who are employees is %48 in Japan.(Which is the highest amount
of Labour Force
between all countries
).Moreover
,42 per cent
of women
work
at companies in the
both Remove the article
apply
countries
of Australia and Sri Lanka.Although
,the proportion of women
managers in Sri Lanka is %9.(Which is the lowest percentage of employers among the whole countries
).
In addition
,the amount
of population
who Correct article usage
the population
work
as
Change preposition
in
workforce
in the Correct article usage
the workforce
united
Capitalize word
United
of
states is 46 per Change preposition
apply
cent
,Compared to women
who are managers at 43per
Correct your spelling
43 per
cent
in America,which is the same as the percentage of women
management
in Australia.Change preposition
in management
On the other hand
,in Egypt
Add a comma
Egypt,
the
companies do not tend to employ Correct article usage
apply
women
to work
and the proportion of work
Correct your spelling
workforce
force
is 20 per cent
.(Which is the lowest amount
of Labour Force
between other countries
).Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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