The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.
The bar charts depict the rate of employees in three different sectors across four nations in two years, 1980 and 2010.
In general, services and agriculture fields tend to decrease over time
while
there was a sharp increase in industry sectors in all regions except China
. In both years, China
's farming advantage is always superior, although
other areas are industrial
Having looked at the given picture, in 1980 Germany and China
had a service ratio of 50 and nearly 49 ratio. Followed by Japan and The USA accounted for 40 and 48%, respectively. In 2010, the China
proportion declined sharply by 20, and the German rate considerably fell to 40. Meanwhile, other countries just dropped slowly by 10%. In contrast
, the agriculture rate of China
had a rapid plummet from 70 to 50% in 2010. At the same time, the other nations stayed steady except there was a slight fluctuation in the German
Relating to industry, Germany always led with 60% in 1980 and went up to 80%, double that of China
. There was a sharp climb of others from 50 to 70 and 50 to approximately 80.Submitted by ieltswritingpracticedl on
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