you have bought some clothing onllne and are not s atisfied with your purchase. Write a letter to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email -> give details of the purchase -> describe the problem -> explain why you need a replacement urgently
Dear Madam,
I
hope
You in
good condition. My name is Alvian who was paid for some Add a missing verb
are in
cloth
in your store a weeks ago, and I am writing this
letter to inform you about a mistake on delivered from your market.
I hope
your employee remember when I buy
some Wrong verb form
bought
cloth
in your place Correct your spelling
clothes
that is
shirt
which medium Add an article
a shirt
size
. I was paid one
hundred fifty thousand for one
things
and I am taking two Change to a singular noun
thing
shirt
at the time, so I have paid three hundred for it.
Change to a plural noun
shirts
Curentely
, my order Correct your spelling
Currently
was come
to me, but when I wearing Change to the active voice
came
has come
this
one
I am feel
inconvenience because the Change the verb form
feel
size
is wrong, your employee has delivered cloth
which small size
. Therefore
I unable
to wear Add a missing verb
am unable
this
Correct determiner usage
these
cloth
and make my wife angry.
For your information, I have Correct your spelling
clothes
agenda
Correct article usage
an agenda
on
next month to visit my Change preposition
apply
families
celebration day, so Change noun form
family's
thats
Correct your spelling
that's
that
way
I must use Correct your spelling
why
this
one
there. Therefore
I want
change my order from small Add the particle
want to
size
to medium size
before became
the celebration day. I Wrong verb form
becomes
hope
you are understanding for
my situation Change preposition
of
ang
able to Correct your spelling
and
delivered
back my order Wrong verb form
deliver
for
Change preposition
apply
one
times before it
.
thanks for your attention in advance, I Correct pronoun usage
apply
hope
you can do it to
soon.
your Replace the word
too
faithfull
Alvian,Correct your spelling
faithful
faithfully
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writing tone
Pay attention to grammar and spelling mistakes to improve the readability of your text. Correcting minor errors can make your writing appear more polished and professional.
coherence
Ensure that each paragraph addresses a single idea to improve coherence. This will make your arguments clear and easier to follow.
task response
Add specific details regarding your order, such as order number, date of purchase, and product description. This makes your complaint more concrete and helps the company identify your order quickly.
task response
Your purpose for writing the letter is clearly stated, and you provided a reason for needing the replacement urgently. This shows good task response.
coherence
The structure of your letter, including the introduction, body, and conclusion, is clear. This demonstrates good organization, even though there are some areas for improvement.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,