The bar chart shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruits and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

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Demonstrated in the provided graph is the proportion of three groups of

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the United Kingdom namely men, women and children who

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a daily diet of five parts of fruits and vegetables between the

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2001 and 2008.

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out from the chart is that both men and

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children

figures remained stable until 2003.

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can be seen apparently that women ranked at first over the period of eight years.

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group, its percentage which

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at about 17% in the first three years of the duration saw a gradual increase to roughly 28% in 2006 and it

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stabilized again during the remaining time.

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data had

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same trend from 2001 to 2003, hovering around 12%, after that, it went up slowly in the next four years and gained approximately 27%, before slightly

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by nearly 2% in the

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year. In terms of females, it dominated the proportion of those who ate fruits and vegetables five times each day over the eight-year period with a significant rise from a-fifth in 2001 to just over

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in 2006.

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, it went down marginally again by 30% in 2008.

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