You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The four pie charts demonstrate statistical information about
electricity
generation in two different countries from three distinct types of energy
and the breakdown of renewables for the year 2009.
Overall
, it is noticeable that Germany
produced more electricity
from conventional thermal energy
, while
nuclear power was the primary source in France
. Among the five renewable energies, hydroelectricity was predominantly utilized in France
, whereas
Germany
heavily relied on biomass and wind.
Looking at the pie chart in more detail, Germany
produced a larger volume of electricity
, at 560 billion kWh, compared to France
which generated 510 billion kWh. More than half of electricity
in the former country was generated from conventional thermal energy
, which made up the largest proportion among the three sources, followed by nuclear energy
at 23%. However
, the opposite trend was observed in France
where nuclear energy
was the main source compared to the smallest amount generated from conventional thermal energy
.
Both countries utilized nearly identical percentages of renewable energy
, accounting for 17.4% in Germany
and 13.7% in France
. In more detail, biomass and wind power in Germany
showed only a small gap in their percentages, constituting 39.3% and 36.9%, respectively. In contrast
to Germany
, only insignificant amounts of aforementioned sources were used for electricity
production in France
, at just 8.1% and 10.5% respectively, while
hydroelectricity was the dominant source at 80.5%.Submitted by uzookim on
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