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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the population of India and China from the year 2000 to the present day with projections for growth to the year 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words
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The line graph illustrates the number of people who lived in
India
 and
China
 between 2000 to 2050 . The data are measured in billions.
Overall
, Both
countries
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country's
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 population numbers
are increase
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are increased
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 during the period.
Althoug
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Although
India
initialy
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initially
lower
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lowered
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it
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its
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 project to outrace
china
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China
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 in the future. On one hand, in 2000 the number of
China
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China's
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 population was over 1.2
billion
 which makes it higher than
India
 by around 2
billion
.
Then
 it rose
steady
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steadily
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 to around 1.43
billion
 in 2022. They expect that
,
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the figure will decline in
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the futuar
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futuar
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future
 to around 1.4
billion
 in 2040.
On the other hand
,
India
experianced
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experienced
 a rapid decrease throughout the period. It
was
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started at 1
billon
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billion
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 in 2000 and
dramaticly
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dramatically
 rose to around 1.3
billion
 in recent
day
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days
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.
In addition
 , they predict the line will
countinue
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continue
go
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to go
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 up , exceeding
china
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China
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 in 2030 at approximatily1.4 and
reach
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reaching
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the
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a
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 peak
with
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of
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 1.6
billion
 in 2030.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words india, china, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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