The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature , and make comparison where relevant.
Contained in the given graphic is information relating to how machines use solar power to make drinking
water
. There are 4 steps, commencing with the solar panel absorbing the sunlight, and ending with the water
moving out through the pipe into the container.
To begin
with, the solar panel absorb the solar energy. It is converted into electricity to run the pumping machine which is located in the underground well.Then
, the pump is opened to suck water
inside the ground .
The ensuing phase is when the water
is hauled up to the ground in a verticle pipe. Turn
to the next stage , the Wrong verb form
Turning
water
tank is put down on the wooden platform . It takes all unclean water
from the pump and exchanges it become clean water
through sunlight . Finally
, the tap is opened to bring clean water
from the water
tank into the moveable container . All drinking water
will be sold to consumers .Submitted by [email protected] on
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