The diagram below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature , and make comparison where relevant.
Contain
in the diagram is information pertaining to different methods of Wrong verb form
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create
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creating
water
by sunlight . Overall
, the system comprises three primary components, namely, solar panel
photo-voltaic cells, an underground bore
or well, and a water
tank
.
Beginning with the first stage , the solar panel
captures the sun
's energy and converts it into direct current electricity, which powers the bore
pump to lift water
from the well and fill the tank
.The system begins with the solar panel
's photovoltaic cells, which harness the sun
's colossal thermal energy and convert it into direct current electricity. The panel
is strategically placed on a pole to face the sun
and is fixed above the ground. The direct current produced by the panel
is then
routed to the bore
pump located beneath the water
level inside the well.
Next,
the bore
pump uses a pipeline to pump water
from the well to the water
tank
, which is situated on the ground surface. The water
remains in the tank
until it is ready to be distributed to the village. The pump's operations are efficiently regulated by the power generated by the solar group, thereby ensuring optimal use of available solar power. In essence, the process involves the solar group capturing the sun
's power , and transforming it into direct current electricity which powers the bore
pump to lift water
from the well and fill the water
tank
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, panel, tank, sun, bore with synonyms.
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