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The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of water use for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate North
America
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, South
America
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,
Europe
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,
Africa
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, Central
Asia
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, and Southeast
Asia
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 in terms of how much
water
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 is consumed for Industrial, Agricultural, and Domestic purposes. Broadly, the
consumption
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 of
water
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 for Agriculture in Central
Asia
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,
Africa
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, Southeast
Asia
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 and South
America
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 is by far the most widespread in all regions, whilst Industry accounts for the majority of
water
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 usage in North
America
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 and
Europe
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.
Water
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consumption
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 at home, notably, is considerably less common in all 6 areas. The prevalence of
water
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 usage for Agriculture in Central
Asia
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 holds the lion’s share, accounting for 88%, followed by
Africa
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, Southeast
Asia
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, and South
America
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, with respective numbers being 84%, 81%, and 71%. The figures for North
America
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 and
Europe
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 are lower, taking up 39% and 32 % respectively. In terms of Industrial purposes, there is 53% of
water
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consumption
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 in
Europe
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, which is 5% higher than the level of North
America
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,
while
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 using
water
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 in the other regions accounts for 12% and under. Regarding the Domestic purpose, 19% of
water
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consumption
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 comes from South
America
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, hitting the highest in the group, compared to 15% in
Europe
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. There is 13% of
water
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 usage in North
America
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, which is 4% higher than the statistics for
Africa
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. Meanwhile, the remaining in Central
Asia
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 and Southeast
Asia
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 are similar, at only 7%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe, africa, asia, water, consumption with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • charts
  • percentage
  • water usage
  • agriculture
  • industrial use
  • domestic consumption
  • energy production
  • recreation
  • regions
  • sectors
  • overall
  • accounts for
  • ranging from
  • relatively low
  • in contrast
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • relevant
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