The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table shows that there are significant differences in patients' perceptions of quality of provision at the three health
centres
. By far the most highly rated is the
Peveril
Centre with an
overall
mean of 8.3 and the highest scores in all service areas. The weakest performing centre
overall
was
Longston
at just 5.8, with
Marchbank
between the two at 7.2. It is noticeable that one aspect - Doctors' service - received relatively strong evaluations in all three
centres
, with scores ranging from8 to 8.7. Pharmacy received the poorest ratings of the services in all the
centres
: at 5.1, 6.3 and 5.8 at
Longston
,
Peveril
and
Marchbank
respectively. Regarding the other aspects of provision, there is considerable variation. Perhaps the most striking differential in ratings is in Response to concerns, which for
Peveril
is the highest scoring of all the aspects, at 9.6.
This
compares with 6.5 for
this
area at
Marchbank
and just 4.3 at
Longston
. Ratings for Care of children are moderate in all three
centres
, though they are significantly lower for
Longston
than for the other two: 6.3, compared to 7.5 at
Peveril
and 7.3 at
Marchbank
.
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