The table below shows how patients evaluated different services at three health centres. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table shows that there are significant differences in patients' perceptions of quality of provision at the three health

centres

. By far the most highly rated is the

Peveril

Centre with an

overall

mean of 8.3 and the highest scores in all service areas. The weakest performing centre

overall

was

Longston

at just 5.8, with

Marchbank

between the two at 7.2. It is noticeable that one aspect - Doctors' service - received relatively strong evaluations in all three

centres

, with scores ranging from8 to 8.7. Pharmacy received the poorest ratings of the services in all the

centres

: at 5.1, 6.3 and 5.8 at

Longston

Peveril

and

Marchbank

respectively. Regarding the other aspects of provision, there is considerable variation. Perhaps the most striking differential in ratings is in Response to concerns, which for

Peveril

is the highest scoring of all the aspects, at 9.6.

This

compares with 6.5 for

this

area at

Marchbank

and just 4.3 at

Longston

. Ratings for Care of children are moderate in all three

centres

, though they are significantly lower for

Longston

than for the other two: 6.3, compared to 7.5 at

Peveril

and 7.3 at

Marchbank

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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2 paragraphs

190 words

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