Write a letter to the manager of the Lost and Found department of the railway regarding the luggage you accidentally left on the train. In your letter •give the details of your train trip •describe the luggage you left on the train •say what actions you want him/her to take.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

this

email finds you well, I am writing

this

letter regarding

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luggage that I left on the train by mistake,the train number was 30 and it was going from the city

center

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to the South, at 6pm

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Monday. I will describe what I left so your staff members will be more able to find it easily. It was a black big bag with white

painting

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on it. It includes

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apply

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important items

such

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iphone

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iPhone

phone

and laptop and other files

that

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related to my work. As well,

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home keys. I need

this

bag as soon as possible

due to

its importance to my job. I kindly request your esteemed department to contact me by email as soon as they find the bag, and

then

we will discuss later how I am able to get it. I appreciate your effort and if you need any

further

information you can reach me by email. Looking forward to

hear

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from you, thank you NOUF NUT, Best regards,

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task achievement

Ensure you fully proofread your letter to catch small grammatical errors, like 'the train number was 30' which could be better phrased as 'the train number was 30.'

coherence cohesion

Try to add connecting words or phrases to better link your ideas and paragraphs; this will improve the flow of your letter.

task achievement

Your letter clearly provides all the necessary information: train details, luggage description, and the actions you want the department to take.

coherence cohesion

Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making it straightforward for the reader to follow your message.

task achievement

Your tone is very polite and suitable for formal communication, which enhances the professionalism of your letter.

coherence cohesion

You have a clear opening and closing, which is very important for formal letters.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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Some people think governments should spend money on faster means of public transport. However, others think money should be spent on other priorities (e.g. cost, environments. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion?

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