The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the production of olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram demonstrates the procedure for manufacturing olive
oil
in a factory.
Overall
, it can be seen that there are seven distinct steps in olive
oil
production, starting from harvesting the unripe olive fruit and ending with the sale of the final product.
Firstly
, mature olives are gathered by workers from the olive trees and cleansed with cold water to remove all the dirt.
Next,
using a conveyor belt, the washed olives are placed into a specialized container, where the crushing process occurs.
After
this
step, the olives are separated into olive paste and seeds. These stones are no longer required and are discarded. In the fourth stage, the olive paste is packed into perforated bags and pressed under pressure.
Following
this
, it is moved to a separating machine that divides it into water and pure
oil
.
Finally
, the
oil
is stored in bottles for easy handling and packaged in boxes before being distributed to various markets for sale.
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