The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs below show the percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970 and 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The double charts demonstrate the percentage of women and men from 60 to 64 years old in employment between 1970 and 2000 in four nations.
Overall
, it can be seen that the figures for males are more considerable than that for females.
Additionally
, the gaps between the two years are more noticeable in the chart for men than for women. Looking at the chart for females, where there are two similar points in two couples of countries. As for Australia, its percentage of old employment in 2000 was 16%, relatively smaller than that in 1970 at 18%,
however
, the figures for both years in these countries were twice as high as in Belgium at around 8%. With regard to the USA and Japan, where the percentage ranged from 36% to 43% in 2000, the proportions in 1970 show the similarity when logged around 38% and 40%. Turning to the remaining statistic, where the proportions in 2000 are higher than in 1970. Belgium exhibited the biggest difference where the number in 2000 was 79%, 4 times higher than 19% in 1970. The second-ranked discrepancy is in Australia, where the number in 2000 was 76% compared to 47% in 1970. In regard to the remaining nations, the degrees in 2000 in the USA and Japan were 73% and 86%, both higher than in 1970 at 55% and 74% respectively.

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  • employment rate
  • percentage
  • aged 60-64
  • employed
  • country
  • comparison
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant changes
  • socio-economic factors
  • gender disparity
  • highest
  • lowest
  • dataset
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