The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian
men
and women
in various age
groups
who engaged in regular physical activity
in 2010.
The chart reveals that among the younger age
groups
15 to 24 and 25 to 34, a higher percentage of men
engaged in regular physical activity
compared to women
. Specifically, in the 15 to 24 age
group
, 52.8% of men
were active, compared to 47.7% of women
. Similarly
, in the 25 to 34 age
group
, 48.9% of men
participated in regular physical activity
, whereas
only 42.2% of women
did so.
The trend of higher male participation continues in the 35 to 44 and 45 to 54 age
groups
. In the 35 to 44 age
group
, 52.5% of men
were physically active compared to 39.5% of women
. In the 45 to 54 age
group
, 53.3% of men
engaged in regular physical activity
, while
the percentage for women
was 43.1%. However
, in the older age
groups
55 to 64 and 65 and over, the gender gap decreases. For the 55 to 64 age
group
, 53% of men
and 45.1% of women
were active. The
65 and over category, Change preposition
In the
women
slightly outperformed men
with 47.1% compared to 46.7%.
Overall
, the data show that men
were generally more active than women
in most age
groups
in Australia in 2010, with the only exception being the 65 and over group
, where women
had higher rates of participation in regular physical activity
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