The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
This
figure illustrates the rate of regular physical activity done by Australian males and females in different ranges of age in 2010.
Overall
, the middle-aged females, in the range of 45 to 54 had the highest value among other items.
In addition
, 15-24 males are more active in comparison with other
men
in other ages. It can be seen that 53.3% of women in the range of 45 to 54 did physical activities. Of course, the two ranges of females are nearly close to the highest amount. The group of 55 to 64 with 53% is the most-second value and the 35 to 44 group with 52.5% is the most-third proportion in
this
chart. The age of 65 and over with 47.1% had the lowest amount.
On the other hand
, Over 52% of
men
in the range of 15 to 24 are more active rather than other groups of
men
.
Moreover
, just under 40% of 35 to 44 is the least active. To look into details, both
men
and women which consist of 65 and over year-old people were really close in value with 46.7% and 47.1% respectively.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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