The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration illustrates the procedure of
glass
recycling. This
process consists of 5 main stages. Overall
, it is shown that in this
process, recycle bins, special trucks and treatment plants are involved.
To start with, in the first stage, the government has placed a lot of recycling bins in every city. Thus
, people can throw their glass
litter in these bins. Furthermore
, in the second stage, special trucks transport the litter to treatment plants. There, the glass
is placed in washing and sterilising machines while
after that, they are crushed and melted in machines which do these actions. Finally
, employees use moulding machines to remake the bottles and shape them in order to send them for reuse.
Subsequently
, a lot of delivery trucks transfer the bottles to the supermarkets and people can use them again like previously. Glass
recycling should constitute a significant part of our lives as its procedure is quite easy.Submitted by sssssraf on
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