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The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
#information #population #zealand #age #group
Contained in the table is information pertaining to New Zealand’s
population
 in two specific
years
 2011 and 2012, broken down by
age
 group.
Overall
, the
population
 of
people
 aged over 40
years
 old increased,
while
 those
for
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people
 aged under 40
years
 old saw a decrease.
Additionally
, the 15 to 39
age
 group made up the majority of the New Zealand
population
,
while
 the opposite was true for those above 65
age
 group. Beginning
with
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the
age
 groups saw an increase in their
population
,
people
 aged from 40 to 64
years
 old increased by 0,6% from 1.331.907 to 1.339.898
people
.
Similarly
,
people
 aged over 65
years
 old experienced the most significant increase in the table (4%) to 596.903 from 573.946
people
, contributing to the 0.6% increase
of
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 Zealand
population
 from 4.381.269 to 4.410.284
people
. Turning to the remaining
age
 groups,
people
 aged under 15 saw a 0.2% decrease to 896.364 from 898.160
people
. Concurrently, the 15 to 39
age
 group’s
population
 declined from 1.557.256 to 1.574.102
people
.
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