The chart anf graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.
The given bar chart and line graph present three various groups of employees in Australia and the number of unemployed
which
from those groups between 1993 and 2003. Both Correct pronoun usage
apply
contribution
are provided in percentage.
In general, Change to a plural noun
contributions
it is clear that
almost workers
working in Australia were Australian. Correct determiner usage
all workers
Additionally
, the jobless rate for all three categories decreased during a period of 10 years.
To begin
, the figures of
Change preposition
for
workforce
from Correct article usage
the workforce
English- speaking
countries and Correct your spelling
English-speaking
non- English
speaking countries were similar with 14% and 10% in that order. Correct your spelling
non-English
However
, the contribution of Australiam
employees Correct your spelling
Australian
out numbered
the others, at about three quarters.
Turning to the remaining data, it is apparent that stages of unemployment were always highest in the NESC group, Correct your spelling
outnumbered
while
the opposite was true for workers from ESC. The percentage of NESC
group had a slight decrease between 1993 and 1997. After that, the line had a fluctuation, it fell from around 7% to 3%. Correct article usage
the NESC
Correct your spelling
Similar
Similiar
to Correct your spelling
Similar
NESC
group, the Correct article usage
the NESC
Australia
workers declined gradually to 1995 and fluctuated Correct your spelling
Australian
during
2 years, in the Change preposition
over
ends
, the share fell Fix the agreement mistake
end
down
slightly to 2003 with Change preposition
apply
regarding
Replace the word
regard
to
the graph, the number of ESC groups had Remove the preposition
apply
oscillate
change from 1993 to 2003, go down to 2.4% and rise around 2.45%, the line reached the lowest point in 2003Change the verb form
oscillated
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