The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line charts demonstrate the
manufacture
rate of three types of oil in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Change the verb form
manufacturing
Overall
, despite witnessing some fluctuations, petroleum
was the most popular fuel throughout the period. In addition
, natural gas
overtook coal and became the second most
Correct quantifier usage
apply
favorite
type of oil.
In 1981, Change the spelling
favourite
petroleum
was produced the most with the
Correct article usage
a
figure
of around 90 energy
units
. Following that, about 80 million tonnes of coal were manufactured in the same year, twofold that figure
of
natural Change preposition
for
gas
(under 40 energy
units
).
After increasing significantly to 140 energy
units
in 1984, the amount of petroleum
being produced remained the same for 3 years, before dropping to 100 energy
units
in 1990. By 2000, the figure
for petroleum
's production rate had surged, ending the period at 140 energy
units
. Regarding the production of natural gas
, after remaining unchanged for 7 years, from 1988, the figure
for natural gas
rose rapidly and reached a peak at over 100 million tonnes in 2000. By contrast
, after fluctuating in the first 5 years, the figure
for coal's production level experienced a decrease and became the least favorite
kind of fuel with merely 30 Change the spelling
favourite
energy
units
was
observed Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the period.Submitted by nphlpro on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, gas, figure, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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