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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line charts demonstrate the
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 rate of three types of oil in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
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, despite witnessing some fluctuations,
petroleum
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 was the most popular fuel throughout the period.
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, natural
gas
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 overtook coal and became the second
most
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 type of oil. In 1981,
petroleum
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 was produced the most with
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figure
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 of around 90
energy
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units
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. Following that, about 80 million tonnes of coal were manufactured in the same year, twofold that
figure
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of
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 natural
gas
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 (under 40
energy
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units
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). After increasing significantly to 140
energy
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units
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 in 1984, the amount of
petroleum
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 being produced remained the same for 3 years, before dropping to 100
energy
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units
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 in 1990. By 2000, the
figure
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 for
petroleum
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's production rate had surged, ending the period at 140
energy
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units
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. Regarding the production of natural
gas
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, after remaining unchanged for 7 years, from 1988, the
figure
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 for natural
gas
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 rose rapidly and reached a peak at over 100 million tonnes in 2000.
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, after fluctuating in the first 5 years, the
figure
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 for coal's production level experienced a decrease and became the least
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 kind of fuel with merely 30
energy
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units
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observed
at the end
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 of the period.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words petroleum, gas, figure, energy, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 5 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • production levels
  • main kinds of fuel
  • time frame
  • location
  • data
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • specific data points
  • petroleum
  • nuclear fuel
  • natural gas
  • coal
  • fluctuations
  • correlations
  • patterns
  • analyze
  • summarize
  • provide
  • general summary
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