The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph provides information about the link between age and
crime
. Additionally
, the pie chart illustrates the proportion of several kinds of crime
in the United Kingdom last
year.
Overall
, it is evident that most of
young people who were from 12 to 28 years old Change preposition
apply
commited
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committed
crime
. Fix the agreement mistake
crimes
In addition
, most of the criminals related
to violence.
Breaking the line graph into details, it can be seen that the highest data was witnessed in 20-year-old criminals, at precisely 80%. Add a missing verb
are related
Moreover
, the ratio of felony
of people who were between 28 and 60 Fix the agreement mistake
felonies
were
all lower than 20%.
Change the verb form
was
Furthermore
, nearly half of the unlawful actions were due to
violence. On the one hand, the figures for drug crime
and property crime
were almost the same, around 23%. On the other hand
, the rest of the pie chart was public order crime
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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