The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. 

Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the comparison between students of both genders who
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linguistics,psychology, natural science,engineering,programming and mathematics in 2011 at a US university .
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data are relatively high compared to
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women
. The most significant difference can be seen in mathematics .
In addition
, natural science had the same
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in both genders. On the one hand, linguistics
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around 55 and 110 for boys and girls respectively .
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psychology had about 150 and 200 for males and females correspondingly. Natural science had exactly the same
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in both genders at 200.
On the other hand
, the
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of males who study engineering is as much
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as programme at 150 .
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, the girls had approximately 90 for engineering and roughly 54 for programming . With regard to
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there is a huge difference between
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. The
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of males is higher by around 4 times than females.
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