The bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying six computer science subjects at a US university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates the comparison between students of both genders who
studying
linguistics,psychology, natural science,engineering,programming and mathematics in 2011 at a US university .
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Overall
, men
data are relatively high compared to Change noun form
men's
Womens
. The most significant difference can be seen in mathematics . Correct your spelling
women
In addition
, natural science had the same number
of student
in both genders.
On the one hand, linguistics Fix the agreement mistake
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reach
around 55 and 110 for boys and girls respectively . Correct subject-verb agreement
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While
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psychology had about 150 and 200 for males and females correspondingly.
Natural science had exactly the same Remove the comma
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number
of student
in both genders at 200.
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students
On the other hand
, the number
of males who study engineering is as much number
as programme at 150 . Moreover
, the girls had approximately 90 for engineering and roughly 54 for programming . With regard to mathematics
there is a huge difference between Add a comma
mathematics,
student
. The Fix the agreement mistake
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number
of males is higher by around 4 times than females.Submitted by ananan2780 on
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