The diagram below shows how glass is recycled. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how glass is recycled.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Presented for consideration is
diagram
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a diagram
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pertaining to various stages in recycling glasses. From an
overall
perspective, there are a total of 6 steps, beginning with the recycle bin containing
glass
trash and ending with new
glass
products.
To begin
with,
glass
items are used by
public
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the public
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,
after
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and after
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a period, the goods will end up in the recycle bin. Glasses are
then
collected by a truck before being transported to a treatment factory. At
this
point of the cycle, glasses will go through a cleaning process with the usage of the washing and sterilizing machine, in order to eliminate all bacteria. Crushing is the main focus of the latter steps in the sequence, which will create numerous shards for the melting part, aiding in the creation of melting
glass
.
This
substance is later poured into a variety of moulds with various shapes,
sizes
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and sizes
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to form new products
such
as bottles, cups, . . .. Eventually, the items are packaged,
delivered
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and delivered
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to
supermarket
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supermarkets
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for commercial purposes.
In addition
, used
glass
goods are put into
bin
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bins
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, and the cycle
begin
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begins
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anew.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • diagram
  • recycled
  • stages
  • collection
  • waste glass
  • sources
  • bottles
  • jars
  • windows
  • transported
  • recycling facility
  • sorted
  • color
  • processes
  • cleaned
  • impurities
  • labels
  • caps
  • crushed
  • cullet
  • raw material
  • melted
  • furnace
  • temperature
  • molded
  • new glass products
  • distribution
  • consumers
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