The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
chart
above demonstrates the 4 seperated
countries female jobless Correct your spelling
separated
separate
percantage
.
When Correct your spelling
percentage
looked
at the Wrong verb form
looking
chart
in more detail during 2013 most top percantange
was England with 6.8 Correct your spelling
percentage
percentage
the lowest which is 5.4 Replace the word
per cent
percentage
with Wales. In 2014 Scotland Replace the word
per cent
getting
leadership on Wrong verb form
got
this
chart
with 6.7 percentage
the bottom Replace the word
per cent
percentage
is Northern Ireland
with 4.6 percentage
.
Looking at the total for each country Replace the word
per cent
England
Change noun form
England's
percentage
getting decrease
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decreased
with
0.3% in a year. for Wales Change preposition
by
this
reduce
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reduces
Change preposition
to
with
0.4% Change preposition
to
moreover
for Northern Ireland
%1, for Scotland however
the graph Add a comma
however,
gets
Verb problem
apply
increase
Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
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by
with
0.7%.
Northern Change preposition
by
Ireland
Change noun form
Ireland's
percentage
get lowed 1% in a year and this
point Change preposition
at this
Ireland
has become slightest
for jobless females in the Correct article usage
the slightest
chart
. 3 country
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countries
are reduce
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are reducing
are reduced
percentage
in a year.Except Add an article
the percentage
Change preposition
in Scotland
Scotland
the jobless female issue has become more significant.
In Add a comma
Scotland,
the
2014 2 Change the article
apply
country
Change noun form
country's
percentage
around
6%.Add a missing verb
was around
However
for Wales around 5% moreover
Northern Ireland
around 4%.Submitted by rashadyus10 on
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, percentage, ireland with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 9 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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